Acrostic Poem
Betrayed my faith faith in you, now I'm
Always feeling pain
Craving well deserved revenge, you have
Killed every last ounce of respect, hundreds of
Scars surround our relationship
Trying to forgive but it's
A useless effort perhaps, I'm
Broken and hurt...
Brought down by your words
Every glance I cast, I'm
Regretting our time together but
Secretly wishing I had you back
I could defiantly feel the complexity and profoundess of your poem. I think creating the run-on sentances added a touch of life and really made it feel as if you were retelling a story. Well done:) AV
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