Tuesday, 24 January 2012

Poem 8 - Cinquain






He’s there
The world is stopped
Just to admire him
Wait, reality has snapped back
He’s gone

He’s not
Like other guys
Sweeter, nicer, better
Unattainable, now that’s what
He is


He smiles
Heart skips a beat
Praying for just a chance
All the rumors, speculations
I cry
Heartbreak
By: Amy Bishop <3
 Title: Heartbreak
Type: Cinquain
Inspiration: A relationship with a certain guy that put me through a lot of emotional battles.


*Out of all the poems I have this one is my favourite. It really managed to capture the emotions and pain that I was feeling at the time. Life is emotional, and sometimes it's good to release those emotions and share what you're feeling. I think this poem sums up these emotions very well andis a good expression of real heartbreak.

4 comments:

  1. Well those are really touching poems Amy. But the text colour is hard to read on your background

    By Mr. Wilson

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  2. This poem is very touching and I love how it's from the heart.

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  3. I really enjoyed how you ended each stanza with a synonym for it's first line, really tapping into that hard pain made it more relatable. Very creative, well done:)

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