Thursday, 19 January 2012

Poem 9 - Pantoum


Title: Romance
Type: Pantoum
Inspiration: I attempted to describe the perfect romance scene. 
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4 comments:

  1. Marianna's Poetry19 January 2012 at 06:59

    so nice! i love the ending! it's just hard to read, the colour seems faded. but that's not important ...

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  2. brennan19 January 2012 at 07:05

    nice snowflakes:)

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  3. Nicole B.19 January 2012 at 07:22

    I love it! It's just a little hard to read :( I like how you made it a story.

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  4. Shane Cosman24 January 2012 at 19:50

    I know you say it "isn't about anybody" but I know who;) And I really lik the poem and structure of the poem. S.Cosman

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